Rough Cut

I think that my rough cut is a good start and is a good foundation to build on.
It needs a lot of work, particularly the parts with the white background. They need something more, to make them different and not just plain. I am hoping to re-film a lot of the footage, perhaps adding effects to some of the footage to improve it.
Audience feedback on my rough cut has helped me massively in planning what I need to do to make my final cut better. The comments I've had back include:
- It needs something more.
- Good start, improvements are needed.
- Enjoyable, happy-feeling.

Out of all the feedback, many people have pointed out that it needs some big improvements, but that it has the potential to be good once improved. I think that this is a good challenge I need to work on and I need to improve my skills on the editing software 'Final Cut' so that my final cut will be able to reach its full potential.